|Reviews for Forget Me Not|
| TylerB 10/19/07 . chapter 1
I'm squirming from the uncomfort that you were able to portray to me so strongly here. So gritty and dirty. I feel like I need to go take a shower.
| in theory 4/17/07 . chapter 1
I'm a waterwhore too (reincarnated merman; are you Cancerian btw?)
"Half-cold bed." I like.
The last stanza is perfect, to me; it kinda tiptoes off. Sneaky.
| Faithless Juliet 11/29/06 . chapter 1
Powerful and passionate; I just loved this, the imagery and storytelling was amazing. I applaud you. Keep up the good work.
| Noir Fleurir 11/8/06 . chapter 1
whoa *whistles* nice going on this one its very deep and thought provoking and you put some nice imagery too! good stuff here
| no.peace.los.angeles 11/6/06 . chapter 1
Wow, intense poem. Some of the images in this are just outstanding. I love "philosopher paint cologne and thyme" and "bloodshot grey eyes." I mean, this poem really is intense. I love the last 5 lines of this, too, "and the knowledge of being alone/dirty/and alone, and sick, and alone, and/quiet, and/still." Just beautiful work, my dear. Keep writing! :)
| caralita 11/3/06 . chapter 1
this poem is so dark in a realitstic way, so much imagery. i love it
| a lonely september 10/27/06 . chapter 1
this is so sad. i love the way you begin it, i love all of it. the details of your first love are intruiging. so pretty... so... beautiful. i really love this poem. and its so sad towards the ending.
| the naked civil servant 10/25/06 . chapter 1
his blurred image and smell
of philosopher paint cologne and thyme
became the icon of the forgetfulness
oh... god that is surreally beautiful. love love adore. just got back from a halloween party. they are... they are crazy... just that feeling, you know. omeone else'sbed.
| Leaving Here 10/23/06 . chapter 1
wow.i loved it.