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| Inkypink 2007-01-02 ch 1,   | This is beautiful. You have a way with words! I wouldn't end too many of your poems with an ellipsis (...), though. (I noticed it in another one) "I am captivated..." It does allow the reader to go on imagining what is happening next, but it's not a very strong ending, because it sort of trails off, as though it is not the actual conclusion of the poem. That might just be my strange opinion, though :) |