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| nighthuntress05 2007-03-02 ch 1,   | Its like dancing, a waltz perhaps, but instead of movement its words. Beautiful. |
| tesa131313 2006-12-23 ch 1, | Very pretty and short! I like this poem |
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 2006-12-09 ch 1, | Nothing to do with dandelions... but i like. I like alot. It's so ... hypnotising. Spesh the last lines. I don't know what else to say but ... wow. Keep it up |
| polka dots and addictions 2006-12-03 ch 1, | this is gorgeous. its just...wow. i dont know what to say. itsb extremely captivating, i love it. |
| AK the Twilight 2006-11-06 ch 1, | Wow, I'm not entirely sure what this poem is about. But that's its strength. "Twists," "faints," the whole thing is extremely vague as to where you are on this relationship. Maybe I'm thinking about this differently than you, the writer, but I found this to be very puzzling. Excellent job, overall. |
| Dina JB 2006-10-23 ch 1, | I almost wasn't going to review, because I skim read without thinking, but then I did think it over and realised that this really is quite beautiful. You're obviously a talented poet, very nice dina |
| RubyRedRapture 2006-10-23 ch 1, | wow i like this one a lot. the words somewhat make the reader feel as if they are spinning as well. nice job!! |