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Twilight Starr
2007-11-02
ch 1,
abuseThat is sad. Good job though.

~Twilight Starr~
notthecreepyfatguy
2006-10-24
ch 1,
abuseThis was really good. You absoulutally, most definatly got the point across. I was really impressed my the emotion in this poem. Powerful. The last line really said it all.
brittany brokenhearted
2006-10-24
ch 1,
abusei absolutly love this poem. i find it very relatable and honest. i honestly couldn't find anythign bad to say about it
StarWonder09
2006-10-24
ch 1,
abuseI really liked it. I'm sorry I won't be able to give you constructive criticism because I didn't really see anything. It was a really great poem!
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