That is sad. Good job though.

~Twilight Starr~

This was really good. You absoulutally, most definatly got the point across. I was really impressed my the emotion in this poem. Powerful. The last line really said it all.

i absolutly love this poem. i find it very relatable and honest. i honestly couldn't find anythign bad to say about it

I really liked it. I'm sorry I won't be able to give you constructive criticism because I didn't really see anything. It was a really great poem!