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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseThat is sad. Good job though. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| notthecreepyfatguy 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good. You absoulutally, most definatly got the point across. I was really impressed my the emotion in this poem. Powerful. The last line really said it all. |
| brittany brokenhearted 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abusei absolutly love this poem. i find it very relatable and honest. i honestly couldn't find anythign bad to say about it |
| StarWonder09 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI really liked it. I'm sorry I won't be able to give you constructive criticism because I didn't really see anything. It was a really great poem! |