This is so scary. In a pretty pretty way.

Whoa! This is way disturbing, but oddly, so beautiful. It's a really nice piece of work.

WOW!! I loved it! It had a sense of sickness in my stomach, but I loved it! It was so amazing! truly a jaw-dropper! So amazing, so brilliant! WOW! It was so disturbing, yet I loved it! So vivid...I can almost picture the part where the little boy gets strangled...and the girl was only twelve...WOW!

WOW, that was really good! So creepy, and a bit disturbing, but I loved it! I can agree with other reviewers, the ending did loose its touch.

Contiue, please??

Gosh, this tale just gives people the creeps. I thought it wasn't a badly written piece; the girl's character is well-developed and the descriptions were vivid to say the least. It's a little disturbing, but overall a job well done.

Well, it started off good, but after awhile it all reads quite slowly. I do like how you kept overusing the word 'pretty' though, that gave it a nice disturbing touch. It started to get a bit rushed near when the cops started investigating the murder though, and it kinda lost its creepiness. All in all, I think it's quite well-written, if a little slow. You have a good grasp of description though, and the main girl did have a good insane feel to her. Nice work.

Now that I've reviewed yours, would you mind returning the favour? Cheers.