sorry about that, i was called away from the computer and i meant to get back and review but i must have forgot.

anyway i really like this, hence the putting on faves. nice rhythm and beat. love the mood of the whole thing, you've captured artemis very very well.

hope this makes you feel better. sorry about the delay.

I think what you have here fits very well. No, the rhyme isn't perfect, but that's not essential. I really like your description of Artemis. I just love mythology. Great job.