Deep without trying to be.

Tim's thoughts are echoes of some of my own, about a year or more ago, figuring out that looking down on others for not being as open-minded as I was made me just as bad as them. (Now, I wasn't quite as bad as him, but I really enjoyed the relationship and characters you explored.)

I don't know if many people could fully grasp what you were trying to get across (myself included, I've probably missed quite a few details of it) - but it's, nonetheless, a really good message. A really good, simple story, uncomplicated by further chapters and things. Really, anything else would have cheapened it. Sometimes you just need to throw sh*t out there and go with it. This flows.

I clicked on this just because I love Antony and the Johnsons and so I had "For Today I am a Boy" playing in my head while I read this. I really enjoyed this oneshot. I cannot even imagine the courage that it takes for transgendered people to just be themselves so thanks, 'cause this gave me some insight into that environment.

Woah. That was deep. A little too fast paced for my tastes, but still pretty darn awesome. It might have been nice to have the whole thing drawn out a little more, put some more depth into it, but the shortness also works for it, too. Eh, I'm not being particularly coherent, I know. This is great. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Though, I suppose, you already know that...

wow - i really liked this. felt deep - and i could relate (i think everybody can) easily. :) great job. i hope you use these two more! ^_^

I really liked this. It was very poignant and rather in-depth. It really gives the reader something to think about.
I too, loved the characters. P.S. actually reminds me of this one guy I used to know. They came off totally realistic and likeable.
So yeah, this was totally awesome. I loved it!

I really liked this, very awe inspiring even. And I do hope we see some more of them and all. Well done! n_n