That an unusual way of looking at things... I don't really get why someone would do something like that, though. It's just not very... right...

But I liked it! - At first there was a aaba pattern but switched to abcdabcd, which was pretty cool... you probably are as lost as I am right now... Oh well. u

I liked it!

4/6

-sama

:O That's just wrong. lol.

Good poem though

o, i like this one. awesome idea for a poem, very original.

I liked this poem. It well written and made me smile. Keep writing ;)