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| SoSophia 2007-10-21 ch 1,   | Youre change of tenses didnt interupt the flow (lol i actually didnt notice the change, but then again im terrible with that sort of thing) so sa'll good :D absolutely beautiful, gave me goosebumps. wonderfully written...what else can i say? |
| SuperhumanChichi 2006-10-23 ch 1, | O_O* I swear, I have never seen a story this well-written on fictionpress in AGES. You know sometimes when I see those hobos sitting on the street corners in the city, I wonder how they ended up that way too. My mother looks down on them with contempt but sometimes I really just wonder... I'm glad I'm not the only one that thinks that way. Oops there I go off rambling again ^^* hah um, so ja, I *really really* liked this story (esp. your style of writing) and I'm not just saying this to be nice or anything. Keep up the awesome work~ I'll be looking out for more great works by you ^_- |