powerful descriptions... great job

Agree completely with the other two reviews here; don't know about a little boy lost though; a man's soul lost in anguish and buried perhaps; so to become a murderous ** themselves.

Excellent piece; fantastic descriptions throughout, to an aggressively impressive finale.

GOP

Evocative and emotive writing that has a cracked, faded, searing and seething beauty. But beneath the bluff exterior, could there lurk a little boy lost?

Awesome as always I find your work an enjoyable read keep it up.
This is quite hard hitting though beautiful love the way you make all the words flow together.