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| simpleplan13 2006-12-11 ch 1,   | powerful descriptions... great job |
| GAGEOFPAIN 2006-10-26 ch 1, | Agree completely with the other two reviews here; don't know about a little boy lost though; a man's soul lost in anguish and buried perhaps; so to become a murderous ** themselves. Excellent piece; fantastic descriptions throughout, to an aggressively impressive finale. GOP |
| Bob Wallace 2006-10-26 ch 1, | Evocative and emotive writing that has a cracked, faded, searing and seething beauty. But beneath the bluff exterior, could there lurk a little boy lost? |
| The Piano 2006-10-24 ch 1, | Awesome as always I find your work an enjoyable read keep it up. This is quite hard hitting though beautiful love the way you make all the words flow together. |