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| Dream that was Life 2007-05-16 ch 4,  | abuseAt first I was going 'What? Why the sudden switch? Who found her? WHO FOUND HER!?' but it works. It's been a while since you updated this, I hope you do so again. Sooner rather than later. R. |
| helen 2006-12-22 ch 4, anon. | abuseomg!UPDATE! DAMN IT! UPDATE! |
| Shelby 2006-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey i know you just finished CBWGW adn all(which is a story i absolutely love) i was just wondering if you were going to continue this or if you were just waiting till you get done with part 2 |
| Noir Fleurir 2006-11-19 ch 4, | abusegood chapter awaiting more, and its not completely similar to jennieMR's Robin's older... |
| Noir Fleurir 2006-11-19 ch 2, | abuseanother good chap |
| Noir Fleurir 2006-11-19 ch 1, | abuseGraphic *shudder* i likie though |
| Raven's Shadow 2006-11-15 ch 4, | abuseAhh...I love this so far. Kepp writing it! I want to read more! Mr. Logan sounds a lot like a teacher I have, Mr. Cicotti. XD Anyway, I'm surprised no one made a joke when Mr. Costler, was it, said he'd tried wearing jumpers to school. Unless he regularly cross-dresses... Thanks for reviewing my story. I look forward to reading more of this. Peace, love, goo, RS |
| Shelby 2006-11-05 ch 4, anon. | abuseWow i love it... are you going to keep adding on? |
| JennieMR 2006-10-27 ch 4, | abuseGirl, you're an awesome writer! And yeah, Mr. Logan is even more intriguing in this story than in Butterflies. I gotta say... woohoo. What's his skeletons? You gonna keep up on this one?? :D |
| JennieMR 2006-10-25 ch 2, | abuseVery good so far! I'll keep up as I can. Lotsa peeps are askin me to read their stuff heehee. And I'm honored:-) |
| Jugglingbearperformer 2006-10-24 ch 4, | abuseYeah, I know you don't want to make it sound like it, but as you said I guess you couldn't really get around it. lol. Don't worry, as it got deeper, its definatly its own story. Ah.. I'm just a tad confused, no, uninformed is more of the word, but how old is Miss Summers? Just wondering, it helps me picture her character better in my head if I have a set age. ^.^ Believe me when I say, you are a REALLY good writer, and you can't compare your stuff to Jennies, or any others writing for that matter, because everyone is different and everyone has a different taste in what they like to read. You can be influenced by other authors, but never compare yourself or you will just find everything YOU think is wrong, itstead of finding the good. But this was an excellent chappie..I wonder why he's so reminded of his lover when he sees her, I guess her looks, but he should try getting to know her first.. Well that'll have to change eh? She certainly can't be stuck in someone else's shadow. Can't wait until you update! Happy writing :) |
| Jugglingbearperformer 2006-10-24 ch 2, | abuseOH I like this! At first it reminded me of "The rose and the Thorn" but now I see its different, very god! Update soon! |