Reviews for Breathing the lie

cakenoodle 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseI've never heard that song before, but this poem is not sucky at all. It's AWESOME! I like how it was phrased, and everything just seemed to flow into the next line. I can relate to this, but not to the 'scheme in the bathroom.' keep writing!
sammybby.x 2006-11-02 ch 1,	abuseThis is really good, Better then some of mine. :) ~Samara~
Left On The Shelf 2006-10-25 ch 1,	abuseI actually rather liked this "sucky poem," it would make a good song.
Somewhere In Between 2006-10-24 ch 1,	abusewow.. this is NOT a sucky poem!! it's amazing!! I love lines "I'll bound this notice to the staff room board Along with the borrowed possessions of my So called friends" especailly for some reason or another. might be because im going through a rough spot with some friends atm.. anyways nuff about me .. haha this is realy realy good and i hope you're feeling better soon!! =) keep it up!! --Alex
Guardrail 2006-10-24 ch 1,	abuseNice, I really like the bits of imagry in this. "Scheming in the bathroom It echoes of the tiles" are really great lines. Great work, keep writing.