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Reviews For: Edible Furniture and Other Candy Lies

simpleplan13
2007-12-28
ch 1,
abusethe title is awesome and the whole candy/cake thing is really wonderful.. awesome write
Theory Of The 4th Dimension
2006-12-22
ch 1,
abuseNice dude...you've got some pretty wicked word flow going on here. slick metaphors too.

"Stick a candle in my heart,

For every time I had to grow up too fast.

You have to set me on fire,

To see how old I truly am."

These were my favorite...

Very intense introspection of self, this i like.
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