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| simpleplan13 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abusethe title is awesome and the whole candy/cake thing is really wonderful.. awesome write |
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2006-12-22 ch 1, | abuseNice dude...you've got some pretty wicked word flow going on here. slick metaphors too. "Stick a candle in my heart, For every time I had to grow up too fast. You have to set me on fire, To see how old I truly am." These were my favorite... Very intense introspection of self, this i like. |