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| Devdog 2007-03-13 ch 1,  | abusevery sad=( but its got its own beauty. |
| spacehikariangel 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abusePsst...psst...I hear this marvelously worded voice in my head telling me to kill...do you hear the voice too? |
| Evenunderscore 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed the poem. In fact I thought that it was funny (sorry, I have a kind of dark sense of humor) the only really sad part to me, was that I thought that something bad had to have happened to the child for her to not want to cry. |
| Wopaloplopyop 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuseo, awesome! |
| Ripped wings of a Butterfly 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abusewai! luv that poem.. makes me want to kill.. hmm.. thnx for ur review! kudos! ^-^ |
| Sadistikal 2006-12-10 ch 1, | abuseCool! I liked this one! Death is an awesome subject! Keep writing! |
| Ryumaru shogunate 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abuseWOW! Awesomness! Death is an awesome subject.. I'm obsessed with it.. ok so I'm a stereotypical goth who likes sharp objects stained with blood.. anyhow great poem! Keep it up! |
| Ravikta 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abuseAi, dark, creepy, and anyone else getting that weird chill up their backs? Perfection. xD Keep it up! |
| Leeona Trance 2006-11-05 ch 1, | abuseOh my... certainly strong feelings in this poem. Interesting. ~LT |
| alice is dying 2006-11-02 ch 1, | abuseUgh, this was just PREFECT. Wonderful wording and so emotive... ♥ Alice |
| R.J. Crosbie 2006-10-26 ch 1, | abuseWhen I was reading it through a few times, I was envisioning a little girl, who had killed everyone in the world, and finally crying. Was this sarcastic? Because I kind of interpreted it as...people need other people. Really good poem, by the way! |
| commemorativemisery 2006-10-26 ch 1, | abusewow this is really good. i dont know what else to say lol keep up the good work! |
| braindead1345 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseBest thing you have written in like...ever! Grat job! |
| Frosted Midnight 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abusethis is interesting...i like it, keep writing |
| Duzen Broken DreamZ 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseha bitch i heart this! lmao =] |