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| Galadh Niniel 2007-03-30 ch 1, | Wow, tells so much in simple words and sentences, well done. Really makes once think. As has been said, the repetitions work really well to enhance the point. If this is auotbiographical in any way: I'm so glad it didn't work and you're still here! *hugs* |
| Avalonian Witch 2007-01-03 ch 1, | The repetition serves to imprint the point The language is open, and gives us a good idea of what's going on inside. Very nicely done. |