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| BloodXStainedXAngel 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abusesad but could most definitely b true. its a good thing everyone reviewing urs sees tht, unlike ppl who read my father ones think im weird. but they just dont no... |
| Manju 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuseoh my that's haunting. so very sad and its even more disturbing that there are ppl like him out there. very nice job getting the reader into the minds of the characters, the words were very well developed to set the characters' age and maturity--the little girl uses words that a little confused girl might use, and the father uses the words a "loving" but twisted-in-the-mind man might use. great job! |
| Unknown Anatomy 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abusea bit twisted. sad. brutal. sent chills down my spine...very well written though, you really got us into the minds of the characters. |
| Windup Hopping Lederhosen 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseTHAT IS SO SKETCHY!! I really like it, but i really hope nothing like this has happened to you. Even though you say it's fiction, I've lied about a few things like that on here. But I digress. I love it, really. |
| Lush-Lalo 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseI dont really know what to say to that one, i cant exactly say it was good because of what it insinuates but the writing is well written if you know what i mean... Luv L x |