I like this one, but there were some things that could have been better discribed. somethings could have been a little clearer. But overall i liked it.

that was odd. . .but intresting. . .wow i suck at reveiwing. . .

Wow. That is a little scary. Poor Zeal. and Poor Rain. So Rain and Kabame are the same. Makes since now! yay! Not confused anymore! Lol.

(High pitch squeal) Zeal has four red angel wings! That is so cool! Lol. So...Rain is Kadame?

-Kiwi-

Aw poor Taylor. Reminds me of Kiyo's third encounter with the Dreamer, right after...ACKY! You aren't supposed to know anything yet >< Heh. My bad.

ANYWAY! DIRECT YOUR EYES HERE! Lol. Great chapter! Keep up the good work!

-Kiwi-

Okay! It's all making sense now! Lol. I really like this story. Did Flay really die? How sad...and how strange...So...the dream was a reality, right? Lol. Oh yeah, expect me reviewing every chapter. I like doing that for some reason.

-Kiwi-

(I finally found time to read your stories! Lol.) Hmm. Interesting Start. Though, I admit, I am a little lost right now, but I guess it would help if I read on! Lol. I like it so far though. Good story.

-Kiwi-

Haai, just finished what you have written. Have too say there are some really interesting concepts here. I have some conserns regarding the flow of the story it tends to hook, probably because of the unexplained status of some things, like why are they able to influence the weather ect.

sounds awsome hope you don't get writer block along the way!

Wait a minute. Rain is kadame and Zeal is the spirtbreaker. I was startying to think it was a dream. This is a really cool story!

that was sad but intresting.

That was an intresting chapter. But is tha place with the creatures an angel real then. . .

SORRY! I haven't been around for a while so I haven't updated my stories or read yours but now I have. I'm not too pleased with chapter 5, I get annoyed with those suedo Updates. The story's plot is developing well, can't wait for another chappy.
Thank you,
Love Emmie

pretty damn good but i'm wondering if they are good or evil guess i'll read and find out

Another good chapter, keep on keepin on.
P.S. Nate in handcuffs, seems familiar.