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| MindyB 2008-10-10 ch 7,  | This has to be one of the most creative stories I have ever read... unique names, unique stories...so far my favorite story! |
| xXRei-DamienXx 2007-12-19 ch 7,  | that was odd. . .but intresting. . .wow i suck at reveiwing. . . |
| Kiwi-san 2007-03-16 ch 5, | Wow. That is a little scary. Poor Zeal. and Poor Rain. So Rain and Kabame are the same. Makes since now! yay! Not confused anymore! Lol. |
| Kiwi-san 2007-03-16 ch 4, | (High pitch squeal) Zeal has four red angel wings! That is so cool! Lol. So...Rain is Kadame? -Kiwi- |
| Kiwi-san 2007-03-16 ch 3, | Aw poor Taylor. Reminds me of Kiyo's third encounter with the Dreamer, right after...ACKY! You aren't supposed to know anything yet >< Heh. My bad. ANYWAY! DIRECT YOUR EYES HERE! Lol. Great chapter! Keep up the good work! -Kiwi- |
| Kiwi-san 2007-03-16 ch 2, | Okay! It's all making sense now! Lol. I really like this story. Did Flay really die? How sad...and how strange...So...the dream was a reality, right? Lol. Oh yeah, expect me reviewing every chapter. I like doing that for some reason. -Kiwi- |
| Kiwi-san 2007-03-16 ch 1, | (I finally found time to read your stories! Lol.) Hmm. Interesting Start. Though, I admit, I am a little lost right now, but I guess it would help if I read on! Lol. I like it so far though. Good story. -Kiwi- |
| HumanInfiltrator 2007-02-14 ch 1, | Haai, just finished what you have written. Have too say there are some really interesting concepts here. I have some conserns regarding the flow of the story it tends to hook, probably because of the unexplained status of some things, like why are they able to influence the weather ect. |
| xXRei-DamienXx 2007-01-27 ch 5, | sounds awsome hope you don't get writer block along the way! |
| xXRei-DamienXx 2007-01-27 ch 4, | Wait a minute. Rain is kadame and Zeal is the spirtbreaker. I was startying to think it was a dream. This is a really cool story! |
| xXRei-DamienXx 2007-01-27 ch 3, | that was sad but intresting. |
| xXRei-DamienXx 2007-01-27 ch 2, | That was an intresting chapter. But is tha place with the creatures an angel real then. . . |
| Emmie1000 2007-01-11 ch 5, | SORRY! I haven't been around for a while so I haven't updated my stories or read yours but now I have. I'm not too pleased with chapter 5, I get annoyed with those suedo Updates. The story's plot is developing well, can't wait for another chappy. Thank you, Love Emmie |
| xXRei-DamienXx 2006-12-02 ch 1, | pretty damn good but i'm wondering if they are good or evil guess i'll read and find out |
| Ryokun Kazchi 2006-11-25 ch 3, | Another good chapter, keep on keepin on. P.S. Nate in handcuffs, seems familiar. |