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| call me ish 2006-11-19 ch 1,  | abusemeh. this killed me because, i know. when you just ned to say imsosorry for all that's happened (and all thats about to). but some wierd since of ?pride? is holding you back like whats the use its over anyway. sorry it had to end that way. |
| the unreal 2006-11-13 ch 1, | abuseokay so i think i know who thats about...am i right? |
| angel953 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abuseAw!! We can't hold on to everyone forever no matter how hard we try. Great job, i can really feel the imagery in this piece. |
| ShadowFane 2006-11-08 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was really good. Talk about confusing, though. Here one day, gone the next...it's enough to drive anyone crazy. I know; it happened to me. Anyway, I'm rambling. Great poem. :) SF |
| Basara 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abuse... I've felt that last time... I understand... nice... |
| tears-of-redemption 2006-10-29 ch 1, | abusethats so SAD |
| Healing Waters 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseHEY! Sorry I haven't reviewed you in a while! This is a sad poem. I've never really had a bfriend I really liked. You know, like I didn't want to crush the guy by saying no so I just say okay. I'm sorry that happened. So depressing. Maybe you'll find someone better. Like what I say, "If one bad thing happens, a great thing is always to follow!" I love how you did the poem. I did see a few things repeated but I do that a lot! :) Hey If you have time I suggest you read "Who I really Am"! Thanks for the sweet reviews! I really am happy you like figuring it out! I've been working really ** it. There is a long way to go! Much more action will come trust me! ;)! Thanks! Healin Waters |
| Left On The Shelf 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseThe style changes throughout the poem, but that works for it. Good job on the poem, and sorry about what happened. |
| Travis C. Eckert 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseDon't come back/stay with me forever makes no sense... |
| Kalopsia 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseshort lines. i think it helps this poem show how he's slipping away from you very quickly. nice work. |
| iMoo 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseHey Hey. I'm sorry about what happend, but I know how you feel and stuff. A person you know you're losing, but you can't let go yet. Like in my first poem I knew I was losing him, but it was so sudden and absurd, even now I can't get over it. I love how your poem brings out the emotions in you, and I'm sure in others too. Best of luck for you. iMoo |