Okay I haven't reviewed yet, and I like it. Lust to dust especially.

PS I bite off ur head! FINISH THE FRIGGIN ANGEL STORY or (imagine the Souop Nazi) no more pictures for you! (snag)

lust to dust, the twist was intresting and just subtle enough to take a second glance.
(i've always liked the word quintessence)
this was great

This was truly fantastic. You blow me away, darling, and I have to admit that I love it.

The way you phrase things, and your vocabulary, astound me. I am left feeling old and washed out (the old fades to gray in the winter) whilst reading your work.

The only thing I'd suggest is double checking grammar and spelling. I noticed a few things-just a suggestion.

Lovely.

♥ Alice

I like "The straight jacket of their fears" really interesting line. I definitely got the whole Hamlet thing from it, its a very dark soothing poem. Very powerful word choice.

hmm.. the last few lines sound like a spell! i like!

Liz

Oh wow !! this was amazing, I loved the lines 'They sacrificed your wings
On the altar of imagination' That has to be with out a doubt the most creative verse I've ever read. Keep it Up!

I'm a glutton for punishment, I'll bite, what inspired you?

Me likes, me likes, me likes. Don't mind my Tarzan talk today. I really like this one. Well done. I like the Lust to dust, because I expected to see dust to dust and then it wasn't there. Heehee

Wow, this is a great piece. Absolutely beautiful.