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dress her up in fairytales
2006-10-26
ch 1,
abusei love the format of this. the way i read this in my head allows the piece to give off a sort of rigid, blunt reading.
Frog Tongue
2006-10-24
ch 1,
abusehmm... it's good... the line breaks are nice... but i don't like the goodnight part.
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