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| dress her up in fairytales 2006-10-26 ch 1, | abusei love the format of this. the way i read this in my head allows the piece to give off a sort of rigid, blunt reading. |
| Frog Tongue 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abusehmm... it's good... the line breaks are nice... but i don't like the goodnight part. |