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skyjenny8 2008-04-17 ch 1,	ever thought of this as a song? I think it should be a song, it's a really good poem who needs to go a step further with it. hm... I don't think i know how to make it better though...good job:D
Takhisis 2008-03-09 ch 1,	I like the last part very much, the one about.. it can take a lifetime to earn ssoene's trust and only one second to break it you broke it The begginning is a bit confusing. You oculd do with a bit more explaining there
Lurid Black 2008-01-11 ch 1,	Its sad and tragic (unlike the word choice used in the poem) really well written, very powerful, keep writing! ~Lurid~
Kaitlyn J. Richards 2006-10-24 ch 1,	this one's awesome. I especially like the first five lines, I'm not sure why, but I really like them. good work. [sorry it took me so long to get back, I didn't get your reviews till today, my email alert thing didn't send them for some reason. stupid system. but thank you so much for all of them. I really appreciate it.]