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| Arichos 2006-10-24 ch 1,   | Funny...something similiar happened to me yesterday. But Wow...intense and the feeling is conveyed well. I love all the references of noise. I'm sorry about your boy...but i can tell you this much. better your heart breaking now then later. It hurts a lot worse when you become attached. |