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| Beauty From Pain 2006-11-15 ch 1,   | Short, but sweet :) You captured all the meaning in only a few stanzas. Nice job ^^ -McKenna |
| polka dots and addictions 2006-10-30 ch 1, | you've managed to write such a lovely poem in only a few words. the last line is a fantastic ending. nice work, keep writing. ~Bex xx |
| FutureActress 2006-10-25 ch 1, | Wow, Well done! I love the simplicity of this! It's short and sweet. Keep it up! -Kat |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-10-25 ch 1, | the last line had great meaning to it. good job keep writing |
| Kaitlyn J. Richards 2006-10-24 ch 1, | amazing. I love this one. you know how sometimes you can read someting or listen to a song and it sounds exactly like what you're feeling, even though you know the situation is probably entirely different? Yeah. But anyway. Very nice. |