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Reviews For: What is a friend?

skyjenny8
2008-04-17
ch 1,
I think if you would have added the line " They are not my friend" to the end it would have made the poem end better because a good poem or story needs to have a good beginning, middle, and end just like a movie. Also i think your ending was just to idk i think its the word abrupt, it just didn't seem to end properly to me. But besides that it was really good. Good job:D!!
InbetweenTwins
2008-03-27
ch 1,
Aww, this was very creative and it had a great point. Saying that friends can be either your friend or your worst enemy, becuase they do indeed know everything about you. Great job, I loved it! :]
PrincessPeaches
2008-03-07
ch 1,
*sighs* I know this feeling.
The person I wrote blue-butterfly about, wasn't exactly fake, not really. And she didn't exactly spill my secrets, but she was like the 'friends' in this poem in other ways.

Brilliant poem, but sad!
Lurid Black
2008-01-11
ch 1,
Good poem, well writen, obviously took time to think up sweet words to put in, great work, keep writing!
~Lurid~
nl1
2006-10-28
ch 1,
Awesome poem! Great friendship values. Also thanks for the review.
Dana
2006-10-26
ch 1,
Very good aspect of a friend and very true
grace havan
2006-10-24
ch 1,
wow
this is so true
i like how you wrote down this emotion that most people feel good job
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