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| skyjenny8 2008-04-17 ch 1, | I think if you would have added the line " They are not my friend" to the end it would have made the poem end better because a good poem or story needs to have a good beginning, middle, and end just like a movie. Also i think your ending was just to idk i think its the word abrupt, it just didn't seem to end properly to me. But besides that it was really good. Good job:D!! |
| InbetweenTwins 2008-03-27 ch 1, | Aww, this was very creative and it had a great point. Saying that friends can be either your friend or your worst enemy, becuase they do indeed know everything about you. Great job, I loved it! :] |
| PrincessPeaches 2008-03-07 ch 1, | *sighs* I know this feeling. The person I wrote blue-butterfly about, wasn't exactly fake, not really. And she didn't exactly spill my secrets, but she was like the 'friends' in this poem in other ways. Brilliant poem, but sad! |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-11 ch 1, | Good poem, well writen, obviously took time to think up sweet words to put in, great work, keep writing! ~Lurid~ |
| nl1 2006-10-28 ch 1, | Awesome poem! Great friendship values. Also thanks for the review. |
| Dana 2006-10-26 ch 1, | Very good aspect of a friend and very true |
| grace havan 2006-10-24 ch 1, | wow this is so true i like how you wrote down this emotion that most people feel good job |