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| TwinDeath 2006-12-30 ch 1,  | abusethanks for the review. this is a well thought out essay, and one that i agree with. my personl belief is that the only freedom anyone has is the freedom to choose your own actions - what you will do next. great job, and i wouldn't mind a review of "A Mercenary's Tale", if you have the time... Live forever, or Die trying!! |
| Porphyro's Madeline 2006-12-30 ch 1, | abuseI think you need some creativity in here, in vocabulary, everything. Thanks for the review. |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2006-11-24 ch 1, | abuseI'm not sure you knew what you were going to write about when you wrote this. The writting has come out a little confused and disoreanted. Thanks for the review. Rowan. |
| Itzcoatl 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuseFreedom is a right.. or is it enforced? Freedom is an enigma to everyone and yet we always stress it as being of the utmost importance in a democracy. This will be a problem in democracy for years to come. Please read my essay on the World. |
| No Trust 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is quite disappointing. In your very first paragraph you manage to demonstrate that you really don't know what you're doing. |
| the coffee fiend 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseYou make a good argument for determinism. You consicely illustrated a complex idea with great visual examples. I really liked how you started small and interwove the subsequent areas normally defined as "choice" into that theory, I thought it was very aptly done. A minor nitpick: when writing "hundreds" it is probably better to use the word rather than a number, especially in an essay. Other than that I can find no wrong. This essay has made my day as I can count it as revision for Philosophy (we studied determinism this semester) for my exam next week :) the coffee fiend |