Beautifully written. Very vivid and I loved the part about the lines. Well done and definatley keep writing.

I really like this. I'm just not quite sure why. I liked the stoplight analogy and how you changed what is typical of the stoplight. That's not why I like the poem, though. I'm still not sure. Nice job, anyway, sorry I'm so vague.

wow... i really like this. i have thought on this subject matter for hours and hours. and you just wrote its perfectly in like 10 lines... wow...

Liz

You posted for gandhilover. That's sweet! I really agree with this poem and I love the backwardness that you and I are similar for!

Life truly is a paradox exploding.

i like this a lot, and i will post my story, i have a few going right now, but i'll post the finished one. great poem nice new style for you. keep it up

Oh, it's so great! i like it the way you depict the life as traffic light