|Reviews for Traffic Lights|
| bipedalcooney 11/14/06 . chapter 1
Beautifully written. Very vivid and I loved the part about the lines. Well done and definatley keep writing.
| Orual 11/4/06 . chapter 1
I really like this. I'm just not quite sure why. I liked the stoplight analogy and how you changed what is typical of the stoplight. That's not why I like the poem, though. I'm still not sure. Nice job, anyway, sorry I'm so vague.
| Leaving Here 11/4/06 . chapter 1
wow... i really like this. i have thought on this subject matter for hours and hours. and you just wrote its perfectly in like 10 lines... wow...
| Kali Sword 11/1/06 . chapter 1
You posted for gandhilover. That's sweet! I really agree with this poem and I love the backwardness that you and I are similar for!
Life truly is a paradox exploding.
| Samana 10/27/06 . chapter 1
i like this a lot, and i will post my story, i have a few going right now, but i'll post the finished one. great poem nice new style for you. keep it up
| waterwind 10/24/06 . chapter 1
Oh, it's so great! i like it the way you depict the life as traffic light