Nice job. this poem reminds me of one I tried to write. I’m "I'm drowning in their blue oceans" is my favorite line.

In my poem I wrote how I wanted to tame the oceans in your eyes. How they're over flowing and diamond tears streak your face.

Keep it up!! :D

oh this is so pulling my heart along. Love the ride.
'Voice, name, and aura' was standout to me.
'I remember you and your words,
Your actions and looks,
And in the latter,
I can feel all your unsaid words.'

"Just made made me feel hit with sensitive ecstatic pain.
A gentle shot to the heart." ~M.

Meant a remarkable amount to me today!
You always deliver the best, and at the correct time.