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| ellys 2008-10-23 ch 8,   | i really liked d story..it was kind of abit kj coz i dont know wat wud happen next...but it is really kewl..XD..arigato gusimas for the good story...but pls update it more need d continuation...i |
| cliched details 2007-06-10 ch 10, | I thought the story was really, really good! i want to suggest that you mention shizuka's family's reaction after she left' and... the reason why yayoi lives on the bath house, and i sometimes notice that you're grammar is wrong... i anticipate the next coming of the next chapter! thanks! |
| CrystallineEyes 2007-06-01 ch 10, | If she was crying all night...then would Yayoi heard her? Hmm... ^^ Please update soon. It's really nice. |
| CrystallineEyes 2007-06-01 ch 9, | Do you like Final Fantasy? Coz Shizuka kinda reminds me of Aeris while Yayoi reminds me of Squall. ^^ |
| CrystallineEyes 2007-06-01 ch 6, | Wait...that last sentence...who said it? This is getting pretty interesting. |
| CrystallineEyes 2007-06-01 ch 3, | Cool. ^^ |
| CrystallineEyes 2007-06-01 ch 2, | I love this chapter's title. ^^ |
| CrystallineEyes 2007-05-31 ch 1, | Hey...this is good. I'll continue reading. ^^ |
| Courtney-V-T 2007-05-30 ch 6, | This story is realy good. I actually got the chance to read two chapters this time! |
| Courtney-V-T 2007-05-29 ch 4, | Heh heh! I'm really starting to like this story. I'll read more of what you have later. I never have the time to read a whole lot. I like your detail and your characters. Can't wait to read more. |
| ellie 2007-03-27 ch 10, | err..it's pneumonia, not ammonia. I like your story so far. |
| ainedamdz 2006-12-24 ch 10, | i can't believe i reviewed this only now. man, what's next? i want to know what's next! and are they both nude in the water?? well, make the next chappie steamy alright!! update soon! ^^ |
| kimono3kitty 2006-12-10 ch 10, | Hello again! The character profile chapter was very halpful, thank-you. It's too bad you're going on hiatus, but as they say absence makes the heart grow fonder. ^^ I will look forward to your return. |
| Chocolate Trifle 2006-12-10 ch 10, | The profiles were helpful, I suppose, although I think it would have been better if you'd tried to include those details in the story. Plus, the spoilers (may/may not be killed off, etc.) ruined it a little for me. But ah well. Onto this chapter. ^_^ Short and sweet. (I think by ammonia you might mean pneumoniona? I dunno, lol.) It's nice to see some Shizuka and Yayoi bonding. :) - Animeniac |
| Ana Ed 2006-12-08 ch 10, | TT_TT Hope your computer gets better soon! XD Oh…and there was a lot of typos…was that the problem with your computer? |