Reviews for the kisses i don't have

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persephone in waiting 2008-04-24 ch 4,	Review on "perfection for the picture": I like this segment especially. It's very picturesque, contains tons of imagery. The lines "we grin and they reply/blink after blink/another family episode/in a sequence of smiles," makes me imagine the flashes of a camera, smiles snuck in between [whether intentional or not]. The "circus of expression" line is a memorable one. And on a last [but not least] note, my favorite stanza is the last, especially "maybe we could duck under the frame/and slip away and you can/finally kiss me candid." It's very reminiscent of Eireann Corrigan's manner of speech in "You Remind Me of You: A Poetry Memory." Keep writing, love. ~persephone in waiting
simpleplan13 2007-09-05 ch 8,	I love that last stanza... I can totally relate to that... well written
Her Wishing Well 2007-07-19 ch 1,	Wow the brutality and sadness of lost love. This was brilliant.
Aquafied 2007-06-16 ch 8,	i cant write about others directly in the idea of writing it to them i begin to write everything i hate about them because love poetry isnt as interesting or compelling
no.peace.los.angeles 2007-06-16 ch 5,	What an amazing image. It really is abstract, but yet I can see it perfectly. Really fantastic. Keep writing! :)
Manuel Fajar 2007-06-13 ch 8,	Ah, — the elemental force that we can't contain and lives beyond words. Nice job. m Some thoughts for you: so young you stepped out to lands others fear tread, — rainbow to dream worlds & that which frightens most you fastened, — but hesitate, about parent's love that green, broad Queen fig tree giving every strength to seed with love nearby earth
Ayx 2007-06-12 ch 8,	The last line of the Kisses I don't have is a real beaut. It brings together the whole poem for me. I loved it. Ayx
Mr. Flick 2007-06-12 ch 1,	Applause. Thank you.
simpleplan13 2007-02-08 ch 7,	beautiful... I love the last three stanzas.. amazing desriptions
simpleplan13 2007-01-30 ch 6,	I like the flow.. it flows well.. I also like the descriptions.. beautiful piece
Ayx 2007-01-27 ch 1,	Awesome...no other word for it but that. Ayx
simpleplan13 2007-01-17 ch 5,	I really love the first two lines... great piece
simpleplan13 2007-01-17 ch 4,	I love that ending.. kiss me candid... the whole piece is beautiful.. awesome write
Aquafied 2007-01-06 ch 7,	reminds me of lying on marble floors in a high rise building not so high but high enough
Manuel Fajar 2007-01-05 ch 7,	It feels as if life is being absorbed by stone ruins. Almost as if druid chanted whispers midst a circle of stones under a full moon floated through long eons to reach our expectant ears. m

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