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| skyjenny8 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abusewow its so... idk... wow I am speechless...It's really good though really wow |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseSweet, really well written, great rhymes, words obviously had thought put into them, keep writing! ~Lurid~ |
| Manyissues101 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good, especially since it goes along with some of the friend problems that I'm having now. |
| Michelle Rainey 2006-11-06 ch 1, anon. | abusePoems don't have to rhyme when They come from the heart.I really like this poem. you can email me if you like |
| Autumn Reflections 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abusetry not to use &'s but the full word. Grammar, etc. Im not sure of you intended this to rhyme or not because it does in some stanzas and not in others, you may need to look into that. Other than those few points i like this. It is very emotional. Very said when things like this happen, it's easy to relate to poems of breaking friendships because it happens to everyone and we all see something special in a poem that reflects our pain, like this one. Keep writing. Autumn |