I think that this was awesome writing. It really touched me. Excellent work. ~NR

Really enjoyed it. Good work.

Yes, it's good. All of your stuff is good, that's why I edit it.

Oh, this has beautiful imagery, and the darkness is so close, so acurate to the way life feels. Very nice.

Deep, real deep. It portrays the emotions quite well, and makes me wonder if that angel caught her.

I left behind a sonnet of dred
farwells and goodbyes and all the regret
sorry to all and thanks to the rest
the angles left me behind
another failed attempt.

your inspiration to me

How sad! I do love this poem and the other one as well. They both speak to me in ways that I understand. Thank you, mon amie!