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Reviews For: Take Me over x3

The Cowardly Lion
2008-02-29
ch 1,
-stopz reading your **-

Your ** writing iz making me sad.

I am so hypocritical.

Loverz it all to death.

Somewhere In Between
2007-02-16
ch 1,
holy crap Josh.. sorry I havn't been around at all lately.. stuff with mom but anyways.. man this was so good.. the poems/lyrics that come in three seconds are always usually really good but this beats out most... I can picture this being played out as a song.. I love it haha

--Alex

(btw added you on my msn with my new addy.. just thought I'd let you know)
ebonyfire17
2006-12-13
ch 1,
i really like this
its funny how sometimes you're planning on doing something, and all of the sudden lyrics or writing pops into your head.
Usually that happens and i have to stop everything I'm doing so I don't forget.
I have a feeling my teachers in the past don't like that, since it happens quite often in school...
sammybby.x
2006-11-02
ch 1,
You Can Really See The Emotion In This.


~Samara~
dalicomplex
2006-10-25
ch 1,
kinda like an emo song eh? is emo exactly a genre? nah. forgive my babbling. anyway, what a very nice piece, i can hear the song playing in my head. angsty, painful. really ominous but with a good flow and rhythm.

keep writing. pax.

review me back sometime. thanks! :P
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