Reviews for Forever
frailty 12/2/06 . chapter 1
"because, you see,

i gave up pills and blades

and scabs and hate and

grief and smoking and

dirty obsessions just for

you."

-Yeah, I did that for the boy I'm with... Not easy stuff.
poetic abortion 10/27/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful.

That is really all I have left to say.

* Noelle
Countess Chocula 10/26/06 . chapter 1
Wow...such emotion. I love the first and fifth stanzas best. Wonderful job, as always.
mizu no kokoro 10/25/06 . chapter 1
some intense emotions in this. good work

keep writing
Lemon Sorbet 10/25/06 . chapter 1
"i’ll braid all the lies that shine like dewdrops all into my hair and wear them proudly for you to see that i keep nothing from you"