|Reviews for Forever|
| frailty 12/2/06 . chapter 1
"because, you see,
i gave up pills and blades
and scabs and hate and
grief and smoking and
dirty obsessions just for
-Yeah, I did that for the boy I'm with... Not easy stuff.
| poetic abortion 10/27/06 . chapter 1
That is really all I have left to say.
| Countess Chocula 10/26/06 . chapter 1
Wow...such emotion. I love the first and fifth stanzas best. Wonderful job, as always.
| mizu no kokoro 10/25/06 . chapter 1
some intense emotions in this. good work
| Lemon Sorbet 10/25/06 . chapter 1
"i’ll braid all the lies that shine like dewdrops all into my hair and wear them proudly for you to see that i keep nothing from you"