 Lily 2009-12-02 . chapter 1 I loved this! It was cliche, but not in a bad way. Great job! |
 SunsetRainbow 2009-10-06 . chapter 1That was good.
I like =) |
 Damned to heaven 2009-09-01 . chapter 1That was one my favourite oneshots. A guy wearing eyeliner rocks and a guy like him rocks even more. I loved her too,she wasn't some simpering girl so I liked that. Lovely. |
 chocolatechipash 2009-08-22 . chapter 1 heyy! i reviewed before but i thought i would reread this a few days ago and its now my favourite one shot and i've been reading it nearly everyday now haha. REALLY REALLY GOOD work! i must've been in a weird mood before haha, fantastic story haha i love adrienne. hope you write more stories like these, they're a pleasure to read =) |
 chocolatechipash 2009-06-28 . chapter 1great story!! so cute i wouldnt liked it if you included when he started liking her though but really great one-shot loved it! |
 bianca 2009-05-17 . chapter 1 awesome, very well written. |
 nissa 2009-03-14 . chapter 1 i know you've no need for me to say this, but that story's absolutely GREAT. one of the best i've read. very cute. hope you write more. |
 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-03-09 . chapter 1Oy! I loved that! It was just so well written...the entire format of the questions, the secrets, everything. It was different, and made me feel all mushy gushy inside. Great job! :) |
 Demeterr 2009-02-06 . chapter 1Ah this was a cute story. |
 Green Eyed Angel 2008-12-30 . chapter 1Something about this is so sweet, that all that predictfullness and cliche stuff are all good. THough i hate to say, I don't like Adrienne, she is a bit of a bitch. So what It's just an A, and who cares about grades? And I'll admit I wanted him to be more punk, but oh well. It's still a heatwarming (even for me) story, so yeah. |
 I Murder on Impulse 2008-12-21 . chapter 1Sweet! |
 gulistanlik 2008-11-22 . chapter 1Wow this was a bit different. Me likes. Congratulations on a job well done!
gulistanlik |
 windyday 2008-11-02 . chapter 1I love it, I love it, I love it. If only I had a skaterboy gentleman to call my own. The eyeliner's a bit of a turnoff though. :). Well done. |
 MissMarie9 2008-10-07 . chapter 1That was really good. I like how you experimented with the social, stereotypical high school line. |
 moshpitqueen 2008-08-24 . chapter 1damn, that was amazing.
i enjoy oneshots, and this is possibly the best one I've read.
I especially like Carlos' complexity, and yet he's still pretty much a good guy.
major kudos! |