|Reviews for Love me, I live in hope|
| Redrosey18 5/12/13 . chapter 16
Hahahaha, so cute.
| jordan.riri 1/17/13 . chapter 16
This is a bit stilted in parts but overall I really liked it ). One suggestion though - maybe put some of the really short chapters near the beginning if the story together into a longer chapter?
| NormaJean Beausoleil 9/4/11 . chapter 16
cute ending. thanks for sharing!
| Cailleach64 3/7/11 . chapter 16
Boys don't really act like that. Even the sensitive, emotional, honest, kind and caring guys and trust me, I know as my brother is exactly that. But then again, this is fiction so I guess guy’s can act however way you want them to, eh? Anyway, good story, really liked it.
| letyoursoultakeflight 1/23/10 . chapter 8
Okay, probably good it was just a nightmare!
| letyoursoultakeflight 1/23/10 . chapter 7
Oh! Wasn't expecting that for some reason! Excellent bit of angstyness ]
| letyoursoultakeflight 1/23/10 . chapter 1
Oh, poor darling!
| Rae Simmons 8/27/09 . chapter 16
Aww. That was really cute, and the flow wasn't too bad either.
Now, if you care to hear it, some constructive criticism:
The time line itself seems a bit rushed. I'm sure it probably wouldn't if I had been following chapter by chapter, though that's the true test isn't it? I had a couple of major issues with spelling such as, "u" instead of "you"; but grammar-wise any flaws were easily passed over. The entire story was fairly short, but intense. It would be nice to see it spread out a little more, like one centimetre of butter on your scone instead of five. Over all it was a well done, if slightly predictable, story and I enjoyed reading it very much.
| MarieVerdonck 5/3/09 . chapter 16
Great story! I really enjoyed reading this story! I did find the ending a bit short...
| Fictatiousrambler 12/22/08 . chapter 16
I thought I'd read and review one of your stories in return for the review of mine.
I thought this was well written, and with a bit of lengthening and editing it would make an excellent story. Not to say it wasn't good already, I'm just a stickler for constructive criticism.
| The Evanangel 12/18/08 . chapter 16
Ok, this the second time I've read this story and it's so good. I love it so much XD
| animebaby2000 10/26/08 . chapter 16
i have to say that was a pretty adorable story , i liked it a lot great job !:D
| Subbie 10/20/08 . chapter 1
Hello! I've actually read the whole story, but my internet is messing with my head again, and the window crashed just as I was finishing the story, so instead of risking it again, I decided just to review on the first chapter instead of the last! YAY!
So yeah, great story, a little cliche, and what DID happen to the father? but yeah! loving it!
| Spinning Jenny 9/27/08 . chapter 16
Ha ha ha.
The camp bed was under his own bed.
Great story, by the way!
| Amazingmutant 9/21/08 . chapter 16
do a sequel. this was amazing. loved every second of it. :D