Hmm... M? Humm... Is very well written, that's for sure. Can't... really... decide... Hmm. Well- yeah. Good writing! Keep up the excellent work quality! (And- sorry if that's confusing. I like it, I think, but poetry doesn't really mesh with my mind.)

The alternating italics was good.
It sounded a bit angst.
The flow was pretty good.
It was cool.
Anyhow. Cheers.

Nice. Plain and simple. It's really hard to CC poetry, because poetry is basically and word-vomit on paper that you call poetry. No offence though, when I say "word vomit" I'm not talking about THIS. THIS I like. It's very nice. See me reviewing? I'm the first to review! Kudos to me. You really should try more poety. It's not all as bad as you often make it out to be.