WOW! I LOVED IT!! my only criticism..is the same as Caston: Fight for the Throne...it's extremely rushed..this one didn't seem so rushed...not as much as the other one...i'm sorry...but that's my only criticism...it sounds like a happy ending for Sharlotte...88 when she died! how lovely! can't wait for the next one!
galaxyruler122490

yay..the bad people are in trouble! sorry...u like names w/ c's and y's don't u? i mean..cicile, cicily, cyril...j/c...i really like it...it seemed a little rushed though..that's probably my only criticism
galaxyruler122490

hm...very interesting...suspensful...i like it...sorta mysterious...hm...
galaxyfreak122490

interesting...it's a little rushed..i mean..the story all together...but still ver different(in a good way)...i actually like it...
galaxyruler122490

O! that was a good chappie...suspensful...:D...i liked it...why was Cassi thrown out...or did she escape? j/c...keep writing!

poor Sharlotte...poor leandra...:C:C:C
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Camelot4551
o...very short...yet still a good chapter...i rlly like the name Leandra...lol...plz write more soon!
galaxyruler122490

camelot4551,
oh! sounds good! poor Leandra! how do they treat their prisoners in the North? just wondering...man, i would love the power, with one wave of my arm to bring people to me! that would be so much fun! lol...write more soon!
galaxyruler122490

o...sounds good! get it up soon!
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