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| JusticeWriter 2008-08-16 ch 33, | abuseSo far so good. The only thing I hate about this story is how much of a crybaby Jaydan is. She cries way too much. I'm usually left slightly embarassed for her after reading about one of her crying episodes. Lol. Update soon. |
| Angela Nichole 2008-08-04 ch 28, | abuseThis story is freaking amazing! I love it!! You are so very talented... ~Angela:) |
| Briar Rose 05 2008-08-02 ch 33, | abuseOkay. So I'm taking it that now they have had sex. I think. I like it though, it was about time. But yeah. You're doing great. Keep it up. |
| Briar Rose 05 2008-08-02 ch 32, | abuseI liked it. They do need a little jump start but I also think that it has to been in bed because that is where they will be the most vulnerable and the most honest with each other. They love each other and they have done pretty much everything possible to show it emotionally, now they need to show it physically. It's good. |
| Angela Nichole 2008-07-29 ch 16, | abuseOMG Hannah!! This story is so good. I've been staying up late to read more... I can't get away from my computer!! lol. |
| It Was Still Fun 2008-07-27 ch 33, | abuseTHIS IS FANTASTIC! No joke. I read half of it yesterday, half today. And I got to the end and I was left with one question. One only. Is it over? |
| Amaryllis Faye 2008-07-27 ch 33, | abusethere's a lot of stories about bands here on FP, but i must say this: yours is the deepest out of all of them. the troubles that Devan have, the relationship with Jayden and Jayden's photography and everything else - it's so much deeper than what I've read so far. if i were you i'd be patting myself on the back :) i look forward to reading the next post! this is really awesome. thanks for writing it and sharing it with us here. |
| pixilated.x 2008-07-10 ch 33, | abuseCannot wait until you update! Absolutely love the chemistry between Devan and Jayden. |
| violet-eyez 2008-07-09 ch 33, | abuseso finally the day is or should i say the night is coming...can't wait |
| dramaqueen89 2008-06-22 ch 33, anon. | abuseOHMYGOD. First of all, I LOVE yer story. Second, I want Devan. He's amazing. Third, Cryin' is one of my favorite songs too :> And lastly, UPDATE SOON! P.S. When is the sex coming? HAHAHA :) |
| buffyeesummers 2008-06-19 ch 33, | abuseI have been rereading this because I don't have anything else to read and I love this story so much. That was when I realized that I have never submitted a review for this -- I am so sorry. I love this story so much -- and more importantly this chapter. Such a great mix of things going on. And the end is just plain hot stuff. I can't wait to see what's coming up for Jae, Devon and the rest of Chrome Mountain. Also, I was on your Profile page, which lead me to the Free Fallin' website link. I love the website you have put up -- very informative. And the person you have chosen for Devon to look like is sexy. Ah-mazing. Anyways, thanks for all of this -- I will be sure to review from now on. Can't wait for the next update! |
| Kairos K 2008-06-17 ch 33, | abuseThis story makes me so happy! And that is a very good thing I love the way you write and how you add things. Its a well written story. I love the character development and how you keep things moving. I hope you update soon! |
| ProudToBeALoser 2008-06-12 ch 33, | abusei love this story!! i definatly can not wait for more! |
| Hoodlives 2008-06-11 ch 33, | abuseWell, that was certainly a glorious birthday!! ;) Thanks for the chapter, it was great!! |
| belle1220 2008-06-10 ch 33, | abuseThis story is completely amazing. I've just discovered it and have to say I'm typically apprehensive when it comes to reading stories by such young authors - and you were quite young when this began - but you've definitely made me rethink that whole bias. Wonderful job. |