hey i just started on fiction press and just wanted to say i love this story and if its not too much could you at least put up a prologue if you really don't want to keep going

lots of respected for fantastic writing
PaleAndInteresting17

Omg i absalutly loved this story i really hope you start to write more of this cuz i love it!

"I'm Not Dead!"? Well, I'm starting to think you are.

ello i LOve your story!
and i have to say i have developed a very unhealthy infatuation with Devan...Oh well.=)
i just wanted to know, do you write all the songs that they sing.. like razorblade, for example?

ok, i know a lot people have teeling you to update, and im one of them. hehe:)

anyway, ur story is great! love the twists and all.

update soon, kk?

You havnt updated in ages and yes it has been months!
So, by all means start writing a new story as longas it means that you will update Free Fallin' soon!
Xo Es.

PLLEEASE UPDATE

Hey. I really like this story, and I hope you will continue it soon =)

So, I just wanted you to know (even though you don't know me) that I think that you should post another story if you think that it will work =)

I would probably like anything else you put up, I just hope you will find time to this story =)

btw, It's summer soon!! Woho! :D

I just read the whole story without taking a single break, this story is AMAZING! please update soon

Please... Please... Please...

Give us the next chapter please...
I want to read the end, I really like your story...

Please finish it.

Hannah xoxo

PS Please!

Hahaha love this story!
update whenever you're ready lol...I'll read it!

xx

I love this story! The chemistry between them is undeniable and so SWEET. But enough is enough! I know they are taking things really slow, and they already admitted they are nothing without eachother, but sometimes Jae just acts like a downright prude.. I mean, the guy hasn't had sex in MONTHS for her, Im sure that's a drastic sexually frustrating change on his part, so why can't she just give the guy a handjob or something to let him blow off some steam? Ah! Sorry, just an opinion. Haha. Other than that, everything is so perfect! Definitely one of the best stories on fictionpress, by far. Good Job!

heii I LOVE UR STRORY
thy r so cute
plz update plz

I Lov This Story
I Hope itss Finished
If Not Update Lol
anyway They are so Cute
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I think you should post the other stories - it could give you more ideas for this along the way -cheesey grin-

-Adds you to alert list-

Can't wait for whatever comes first; next chapter or an 'Untitled Document'!!

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