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| Take the Money and Run 2008-02-23 ch 1,  | abuseThe way you described writer's block is just amazing, i wrote a poem about writer's block a couple years ago but mine was really simple. the only suggestion i have is to maybe change the line "this place of fantasized dreams was never still," the rhyme seems a tiny bit forced but its really not bad. --SB, review marathon. |
| Briar's Thorn 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abusei hate writers block. this is beautifully written i love it as always. i find reading helps with writters blck or if you have a friend thats really random talk to them you'd be surprised how much it helps! keep writting! |
| Godly Luke Staden 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseIt's very very good again, however the note saying the poem is about writers block ruins the poem. The poem was good however you may want give your poems a more structured effect. i always love to read your poems and i hope you carry on writing. any way long time no see from me! well if your wondering its because i havent realy been able to write that much recently due to the fact im not depressed, stopped cutting a long time back, have stopped drinking and am no longer single so there is nothing to depress me and seeing as most of my poems were pretty bleak it makes sense. keep on writing Godly Luke Staden |
| bollywally 2006-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI can't wait to read this! your writing is excwisit! I think I will Like it! .. ~~ |
| SwitchVale 2006-11-14 ch 1, | abuseThat is an amazing way to describe writer's block. |
| Benevolent Inferno 2006-10-29 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written. The images are wonderfully fragmented and spontaneous. Chaos and silence are juxtaposed nicely. -Mr. Kuo |