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Marial79
2008-12-02
ch 38,
Hey,
I love your story so far and i am so glad you are updating and your sister getting better.
I think your story is wicked idea but i reckon your story plan is pretty long and the the chapters actually go on for quite long maybe you should stuff a bit more into the chapters. Not just writing but actually plots that are happening. And i think yuo could wrap up a story in this fanfiction and then maybe do a sequel carryin gon with the story.
Its just a suggestion if you dont want it.

Keep up the good work
Maria
Venus Smurf1
2008-12-01
ch 38,
I'm so glad you're updating again! This was one of my favorite stories, and I almost cried when you took your break (though of course I totally understand). Still, I'm glad you're writing again. I get to read more of this wonderful story, and now we know that things are probably looking up for you if you're able to write at all.
jinx89
2008-12-01
ch 38,
Sweet!...An update! You definitely were able to get back into the character's minds easily so that's good. I have to admit I was a little worried about that but you proved me completely wrong! Keep up the amazing work
glamoureste
2008-12-01
ch 38,
** girl! Where the ** have you been?
But AH I can't believe you finally updated!
I'm so excited.

Now hurry up and update really quickly this time :]
I'm psyched to see what happens.
Ciaobellla
2008-12-01
ch 38,
yea!
OMG- i am so excited that you finally updated! eep!
update again soon please!
random2one
2008-12-01
ch 38,
Brilliant story! I love it so much! It's so entertaining and really good! It just gets better and better! I can't wait to read more of it! Update soon, please!:]
QuebecNights
2008-12-01
ch 38,
hooray! the story's back!! this made my day. i loved this story when I read it a few months ago and I plan to reread it this afternoon. :p
i'm very glad to see updates, and also very happy to hear about your sister.
i look forward to more updates :D
artistic dreamer
2008-11-30
ch 38,
Hi! so glad to know that your sister's doing better! and so excited and happy that you're continuing with this story! :D i'm so happy and the new title is definitely different, but a nice change :D can't wait to read more! so excited!

rachel :D
Icestreak
2008-11-24
ch 38,
you're back! keep on writing
jinx89
2008-10-27
ch 39,
Wow...I can't remember if I ever reviewed this when you were writing it (probably not since I always forget to review at the end of chapters). Anyway, I've been keeping tabs on this, hoping that you would continue and I'm so glad to see that you finally came back! I hope all is well and really, I'm glad you plan on continuing this. It's really a great read!
Ciaobellla
2008-08-25
ch 39,
i'm really sorry about your sister. but i just wanted
to let you know that this story is amazing, and i really think
you should keep on going on with it ;)
xXReader.Desu.YoXx
2008-06-13
ch 39,
Hello.
I doubt you still check in on reviews to read all the rants of readers, but i thought it was nice of you to leave a outline of the rest of the story.
I loved it, i'll tell you that. It was MUCH better than a cliff hanger& a complete nothing.
Thank you so much & i hope your sister is okay :D
I Murder on Impulse
2008-04-26
ch 39,
haha cute!
Genato
2008-04-21
ch 39,
i can't believe you just eneded it like that. oh well. at least you put the ending. :)
random2one
2008-04-17
ch 39,
Aww! I love your story! It's too bad that you couldn't finish it, but you did give a little outline on the ending, so I guess I can't complain! Good job on it!:]
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