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| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2006-11-28 ch 1,   | Intresting idea. And congratz on being able to spell Lathe - you know what word I'm talking about. I can't spell it. 0_0 Rowan. |
| silver rainfall 2006-11-08 ch 1, | I liked it. It's really sweet and sad. Hope to read more. |
| Michael's Divinity 2006-11-08 ch 1, | Wow, I mean. I can't even explain how I like this one. Keep it up. ^-^ |
| Pocket full of lightbulbs 2006-11-06 ch 1, | A portrait of sadness painted with the blood of an emo. It's heavy **, take it a little easier on the rapid fire imagery next time. Otherwise it is exactly what is should be. |
| Alena D'Etoiles 2006-10-30 ch 1, | hard to understand? ::tear:: |
| Lady-of-Aquitaine 2006-10-29 ch 1, | This poem was mysterious, and hard to understand, like a labyrinth. Constructive critisism: Make it smoother! THANKS! |
| teh tarik 2006-10-25 ch 1, | there's such a fragility & bitterness to this piece. beautifully done. |