whoa there. i looked at this story's last update: 2003??

why haven't you continued?! i'd really like to see where this story goes. just from this first chapter, i can tell that this isn't just another cliche fantasy. it actually seems quite interesting.

pleasr think about giving your piece another shot. you might just surprise yourself :)

Hehe! sorry but their accent makes me laugh! it is a bit extreme... I like this idea though, it's something new and different - interesting. I want u to write more! I'm interested to know what this gathering unicorn wants her for... keep going! :) x

~~“Ah, Storm,” said her mother, with a soft, almost Irish accent, “ It be good to see you again, me lass. Would ye be so kind is to go outside and tell that father ‘o yours that his meal be ready?”~~
You write that it's a soft, *almost* Irish accent, but this seems a bit harsh. Other than that, i say continue! continue!

Write morewritemorewritemore!!!!!!!!!! :p Sorry but i'm very interested to learn what's going to happen next. Write more!

more, onegai?

I'd like to see what happens. and let me tell you something I've found out by myself here: review are nothing, don't write to get reviews, write 'cuz you've to, 'cuz it's something inside you, a flame that burns your soul.
I would have stopped writing long ago If I had counted only my reviews. They helps but they're not all the fun.