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| eamane tinuviel 2008-07-31 ch 1,   | whoa there. i looked at this story's last update: 2003?? why haven't you continued?! i'd really like to see where this story goes. just from this first chapter, i can tell that this isn't just another cliche fantasy. it actually seems quite interesting. pleasr think about giving your piece another shot. you might just surprise yourself :) |
| Grez 2006-05-12 ch 1, | Hehe! sorry but their accent makes me laugh! it is a bit extreme... I like this idea though, it's something new and different - interesting. I want u to write more! I'm interested to know what this gathering unicorn wants her for... keep going! :) x |
| Ryelle Of Sytherin 2003-03-23 ch 1, | ~~“Ah, Storm,” said her mother, with a soft, almost Irish accent, “ It be good to see you again, me lass. Would ye be so kind is to go outside and tell that father ‘o yours that his meal be ready?”~~ You write that it's a soft, *almost* Irish accent, but this seems a bit harsh. Other than that, i say continue! continue! |
| Raven 2001-03-31 ch 1, | Write morewritemorewritemore!!!!!!!!!! :p Sorry but i'm very interested to learn what's going to happen next. Write more! |
| Sakura1985 2001-03-25 ch 1, | more, onegai? |
| Dizzy 2001-03-13 ch 1, | I'd like to see what happens. and let me tell you something I've found out by myself here: review are nothing, don't write to get reviews, write 'cuz you've to, 'cuz it's something inside you, a flame that burns your soul. I would have stopped writing long ago If I had counted only my reviews. They helps but they're not all the fun. |