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| WiltingBlackRose 2006-12-08 ch 1, | Wow, that was amazing. No joke. Perfect adding the "old language" |
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-11-12 ch 1, | Interesting poem, some of the lines make me contemplate on them. Great work, and I love the title too. ^^ Keep it up. |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2006-10-26 ch 1, | Your idea of how we 'fight death' at birth is intriguing and the reference and play on words to the Our Father is powerful. EB |
| Johnathen Braun 2006-10-25 ch 1, | :( that's so sad. I know exactly what that's like! |