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| katie 2007-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is a very good story, you have a nice writing style. If you decide to put up another chapter i would love to read it, however if you don't this one chapter could stand quite gracefully on its own. |
| Silver Dolphin - archive 2006-10-29 ch 1,  | abuseA very interesting beginning. I've never come across a mermaid story with a sea dragon in it before. I particularly like the end of this chapter - looking forward to seeing where the story goes next! |
| Ra-ooo 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuseHey nice story! I like the way you write, it's not too flowery but not too plain either. And for once, someone has good grammar and mechanics. Hah! You should put up another chapter soon! |