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| Experiment 156-SKYE 2007-05-06 ch 17, | abusemajor aw-age |
| Experiment 156-SKYE 2007-05-05 ch 11, | abuseNO! |
| Experiment 156-SKYE 2007-05-05 ch 8, | abusethat was so sweet it was corny or so corny it was sweet. |
| Experiment 156-SKYE 2007-04-30 ch 1, | abuseWHY must you do this! WHY NO! |
| Erisah Mae 2007-04-07 ch 18, | abuseI don't think I've ever said this in a review, but thanks for this. It was so good to come to the end of all of that angst with a hopeful ending. Your characterization is excellent- in the end I was able to associate with pretty much all of them... and feel slight disappointment when this came to an end. Wonderful. Erisah |
| Serom Kim 2007-03-22 ch 1, | abuseWow, a story that takes place in Korea! And a good one, too! I like the first chapter already! I'll review the rest of your stories when I get to them, it's night here and I'd like to get some sleep. But I'll tell you that this first chapter is good. Though this chapter is good, I'd like to ask you to reformat your quotes. They were a little confusing. Could you make it so that what one character says is on one paragraph? A funny thing, however. I'm writing a story wit Korean characters, and at least one character here shared a name with one of my characters! Korean names don't have that many options, I guess. |