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| zagato 2008-07-23 ch 1,   | I like this story too. Thank you |
| Cylinsier 2008-03-16 ch 1, | I really liked this one. It leaves you hanging a bit, but in a good way. |
| sephare 2007-05-08 ch 1, | Hm, is this the same Murilo from Obsesionado? If it is, I wonder if Christina will ever find out about..what happened to him. Or is this autobiographical? I can't imagine what it'd be like to have a person say that line about waiting forever. It seems so final, even though some probably change their mind at some time. I hope you aren't still being bothered by him. But reading the story makes you feel sorry for Murilo. Even though the end made him seem a bit extreme. |