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| Ghost in the Dark 2006-10-26 ch 1, | I like your style of writing here, as I am an avid fan of details. Morbid and confusing, which are key traits to the darker stories. I loved it. |
| jadedmari 2006-10-26 ch 1, | You have an overwhelming talent for detail! The story's good, and I get the gist, but don't get caught up in details alone. Good job! |
| Circus Caprice 2006-10-26 ch 1, | Morbid, confusing, but a nice little story of death. Nice use of vocabulary too. |