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Reviews For: Evergreen Valentine

Awen1923
2006-11-04
ch 1,
Very well written. I loved the last three lines of the poem, they worked very well.
Phoenix Melantha
2006-10-29
ch 1,
I love this. Seriously. Poe is a genius and you deserve to be his apprentice/protege/minion. I seriously feel like figuring this one out now...it's with the whole "first line, first letter; second line, second letter; etc" and you put them all together and it spells your Valentine, correct? Can't wait to get the answer now actually :D

Wishing that you write more more MORE and tell me all about it ^ ^ Especially when it's good stuff like this!

t's time to admit that nothing is right,
So let's burn the city, and hide the light.
~Phoe
Guardrail
2006-10-28
ch 1,
Wonderfully written. The bits in parentheses are great, and the last two lines end the poem wonderfully. I really enjoyed this poem a lot, keep writing.
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