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| Awen1923 2006-11-04 ch 1, | Very well written. I loved the last three lines of the poem, they worked very well. |
| Phoenix Melantha 2006-10-29 ch 1, | I love this. Seriously. Poe is a genius and you deserve to be his apprentice/protege/minion. I seriously feel like figuring this one out now...it's with the whole "first line, first letter; second line, second letter; etc" and you put them all together and it spells your Valentine, correct? Can't wait to get the answer now actually :D Wishing that you write more more MORE and tell me all about it ^ ^ Especially when it's good stuff like this! t's time to admit that nothing is right, So let's burn the city, and hide the light. ~Phoe |
| Guardrail 2006-10-28 ch 1, | Wonderfully written. The bits in parentheses are great, and the last two lines end the poem wonderfully. I really enjoyed this poem a lot, keep writing. |