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Reviews For: I Love You

The Ferrett
2007-01-24
ch 1,
abuseSorry for the insensitivity but AW. I'm in a slightly odd mood so this feeling is not condusive. It's decent, but is a tad mushy to really convay a emotional link.
Hali
2007-01-21
ch 1,
abuseI absolutely love this poem. It's really good...I can totally relate to it. Keep writing!
ming yee
2006-10-29
ch 1, anon.
abusehey..
first of all , u're poems are gud .. as always.. keep up the gud work.. or in this case .. keep up the gud stories..
Mea Somnium
2006-10-26
ch 1,
abuseThat was really well done! I enjoyed it.
Hannah-lou
2006-10-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseAll right... I liked it, I liked it a lot. However, there are a couple of grammar issues, and I thought that this rhyme sounded quite forced:

Three words that is (should be that *are*) nothing but a truth.

I love you.

Three words that make me feel uncouth.

Perhaps you could try and find a more fitting word? Even if it doesn't rhyme as well, it would sound more natural. Other than that, however... it was really good :)
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