Reviews for v a n d a l i z e ' d

t-t-t-ouch. 2007-10-28 ch 1,	i love the last to lines like they were a part of me.
Crossing the Rubicon 2006-10-26 ch 1,	This poem is wonderful, and the last two lines are that breathless kind of perfect.
Reborn As I 2006-10-26 ch 1,	this is beautiful, but i can't help but be bothered by the last line (which is still my favorite part despite my little beef with it). i feel the "on" in "...on your soul" would sound better if replaced by "in". i mean the piece is great and all, but i'm just sayin'...